Tuesday, April 20, 2010

Two Lives

Two hearts beating, two minds dreaming,
under severed skies lie two lives fleeting.
One stays north while one flies south,
connected they speak in unison
however far silent mouth to mouth.

Through oceans and storms the tidals
and quakes, their bond blossomed stronger
across the breadth of paths gently taken.
But distance and time was forever unkind
and their roots slowly were shaken.

A new face here and a new sight there
had ushered them to far off planes.
And experience would show
that it takes more than snow
to douse the heat from old flames.

1 comments:

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